I rather enjoy these lyrics. This type of music, though not truly my cup of tea, allows the listener to really focus in on what is said. And I'm certain you put a bit of work into these due to the word choice and some of the trickier lines.

My only hang-up, and it really is a small one, is that your voice doesn't quite fit the genre implied. May it be the effects or just your natural timbre.

I enjoyed the singing, though. The singing was wonderful.

Nice

A little dramatic, yes. But not unwholesome. It's a pleasant listen.

Good listen. Nice show of guitar and vocal ability

It really says a lot about a musician to write and perform a song unaccompanied and make it feel as though the sounds were complete. It was jazzy enough to make me smile. All in all a nice listen with a nice melody. A fine show of skill and songwriting capabilities.